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Originally Posted by Vineeth vasudevan

gollam....

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:thnku: :thnku:

puthiyathu vallathum undaavumennu veruthe aashichu...:sad:

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Originally Posted by maryland

puthiyathu vallathum undaavumennu veruthe aashichu...:sad:

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Kavithakonnum oru panjavum illa .... Oru pazhaya dialogue orma varunnu .. "Edanjaa kombant krishnamanikku thoatti ketti kalikkaruthu"

Good-bye


Some say 'byes through eyes,
And some say just good-byes,
Good-byes maybe good or bad,
But will always make you sad.

Your eyes may shed some tear,
Or you may drink some beer,
Maybe it will less the pain,
Or might make you go insane.

But it is a game so fair,
As it is a loss to bear,
No one can ever gain anything
Without ever lose something.

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Originally Posted by Naradhan

Good-bye


Some say 'byes through eyes,
And some say just good-byes,
Good-byes maybe good or bad,
But will always make you sad.

Your eyes may shed some tear,
Or you may drink some beer,
Maybe it will less the pain,
Or might make you go insane.

But it is a game so fair,
As it is a loss to bear,
No one can gain something,
Without ever lose something.

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valare rhythmic aanallo...:ok:
I like this kind of poems...:partytime2:
last line-ile grammar mistake ozhichaal baakki okke 100% good :ok:

muni.... :clap3: :clap3:

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Originally Posted by maryland

valare rhythmic aanallo...:ok:
I like this kind of poems...:partytime2:
last line-ile grammar mistake ozhichaal baakki okke 100% good :ok:

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muniye apamaanicha marye 4 divasthekku ban cheyyuka...5k post delete cheyyuka....

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Originally Posted by maryland

valare rhythmic aanallo...:ok:
I like this kind of poems...:partytime2:
last line-ile grammar mistake ozhichaal baakki okke 100% good :ok:

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Enikkathu ethra sramichittum nereyakkan kazhinjilla .... suggestions undel parayu ...

Kollatta :clap:.. enikkum rhyming ayitt ullathu ishtaanu :band:

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Originally Posted by Naradhan

Enikkathu ethra sramichittum nereyakkan kazhinjilla .... suggestions undel parayu ...

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If you don’t lose something :athupinne:

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Originally Posted by Naradhan

Good-bye


Some say 'byes through eyes,
And some say just good-byes,
Good-byes maybe good or bad,
But will always make you sad.

Your eyes may shed some tear,
Or you may drink some beer,
Maybe it will less the pain,
Or might make you go insane.

But it is a game so fair,
As it is a loss to bear,
No one can gain something,
Without ever lose something.

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Niyamaparamaya munnariyippillathe ee vari ivide prasidhkarichathinenthire ninayma nadapadi undavunnathaanu.